Advertising Information
Google
 

Testing Headlines


A correspondent to AdBriefing, my monthly newsletter, has posed a very sticky question. How, she asks, can you tell whether a headline you have written is a good one?or not? What she means by this, I imagine, is whether the headline will actually help to make sales, rather than just act as a passing amusement to its readers.

The latter precept, that a headline should actually try to sell something, is not as universally known as it might be. The vast proportion of headlines actually say nothing whatsoever about the product and the benefits of owning it. And the reason for this is that good, selling headlines are not easy to write. So the majority of so-called copywriters take the easy route and produce something which they think is humorous or eye-catching and hope that this will do the job. That it won't and doesn't can be witnessed day in and day out in press ads, brochures and websites worldwide.

But I digress.

There is sadly no absolute test that a headline will do the job it is paid to do. If there were, we benighted copywriters would be earning ten times what we are earning now, on the grounds that our work would be foolproof. Every headline we conceived would be irresistible; and products would move off shelves like Spring snow off a dyke.

But there is a test - a very good and worthwhile test - that you can apply to any headline you create. I call it the 'So What?' test.

Allow me to give you an example of 'So What?' in action. If you produce a headline that says: Our Widget works twice as fast as any other Widget, and then ask yourself 'So What?', it immediately becomes clear that the line is bereft of a sales proposition. Because there is no obvious benefit to the potential customer.

On the other hand, if you write: Our Widget works twice as fast, so you do the job in half the time, then the 'So What?' has been answered. Your customer can cut his production time by 50%.

Likewise, were you to write: Our Widget is so small, it fits into the palm of your hand, you simply invoke 'So What?'. Which results in: Our Widget fits into the palm of your hand, so it goes wherever you go. In this case, the benefit is portability. You can use it anywhere.

Over the years, I have found the 'So What?' test to be invaluable. You might care to give it a try yourself.

And on the subject of headlines consider this.

When trying to write a headline many people tend to go off half-cocked. They consider the marketing brief, then bash down a headline or two to satisfy it. After that, they write the body copy.

Experience shows, however, that if you write the body copy first, the odds are that there will be the makings of a headline within it struggling to get out.

Body copy is, or should be, a carefully worked and logical encapsulation of the marketing brief. In other words, the whys, the wherefores and the benefits of owning the product or service. It makes sense, then, that if it is properly written, there is a very real chance of finding an embryo headline lurking within it.

Why not give it a whirl? You may be agreeably surprised.

About The Author

Patrick Quinn is an award winning copywriter with 40 years' experience of the advertising business in London, Miami, Dublin and Edinburgh.

He publishes a FREE monthly newsletter, AdBriefing. Subscriptions are available at: http://www.adbriefing.com

j.p@markethillpublishing.co.uk


MORE RESOURCES:

Health Newstrack

Researchers: Ban on Fast Food TV Advertising Would Reverse ...
MarketWatch - 22 hours ago
The study also reports that eliminating the tax deductibility associated with television advertising would result in a reduction of childhood obesity, ...
Fast-food ad ban could cut child obesity: US study Reuters
Study: Banning fast-food TV ads could dent obesity The Associated Press
TV ads for fast food contribute to child obesity Los Angeles Times
TheMedGuru - AdAge.com (subscription)
all 275 news articles


thinkLA Honors Horizon Media's Zachary Rosenberg as Southern ...
MarketWatch - 15 hours ago
Eligibility is open to all advertising executives at agencies, media companies and public or private organizations. Nominations are reviewed by the ...


Big Three automakers curtail advertising dollars
MarketWatch - 19 hours ago
By David B. Wilkerson, MarketWatch CHICAGO (MarketWatch) -- The Big Three US car manufacturers have cut their advertising spending this year in another sign ...
Nielsen: Big 3 cutting back on ad spending MarketWatch
all 7 news articles


The Inquisitr

Apptera secures $10.5 million for advertising network expansion
CNET News, CA - 23 hours ago
Apptera, a company that delivers visual and voice advertising, announced Wednesday that it secured $10.5 million in funding from Lightspeed Venture Partners ...
Apptera Secures Additional $10.5M Funding, Appoints Former Yahoo ... MarketWatch
Mobile Ad Network Apptera Earns $10.5 million in Funding Wired News
Apptera gets more funding and a former Yahoo VP on its board VentureBeat
Bizjournals.com - Digital Media Wire
all 18 news articles


McClatchy Reports October 2008 Revenues
MarketWatch - 16 hours ago
today reported that consolidated revenues in October 2008 decreased 17.8% and advertising revenues were down 20.4% compared to revenues in October 2007. ...
McClatchy October revenue falls 17.8 percent Forbes
McClatchy ad revenue drops 20% in October Bizjournals.com
No October Surprise: McClatchy Revenue Down 18% On Continued Ad ... Editor & Publisher
Sacramento Bee - Sacramento Bee
all 32 news articles


A Global Strategic Business Report on the Advertising Industry ...
MarketWatch - 17 hours ago
The global outlook series on the Advertising Industry provides a collection of statistical anecdotes, market briefs, and concise summaries of research ...


mocoNews.net - Interview: Pekka Ala-Pietila, CEO, Blyk: Mobile ...
Washington Post, United States - 19 hours ago
The downturn is obviously having an impact on advertising, what does this mean for Blyk, given that your model is so reliant on it? ...


AFP

PC Magazine, a Flagship for Ziff Davis, Will Cease Printing a ...
New York Times, United States - 1 hour ago
It is the latest of several magazine publishers to drop a print edition, as advertising plummets and the cost of printing a paper version rises. ...
Ziff to End a Print Edition Wall Street Journal
paidContent.org - Ziff Davis To Close Print PCMag, Focus On Online ... Washington Post
PC Magazine goes online-only The Associated Press
Marketing Pilgrim - Fudzilla
all 132 news articles


Praebius Communications, Inc. Announces the Opening of Its Chicago ...
MarketWatch - 1 hour ago
Praebius currently inserts spotcable advertising to over 200000 households thru our newly opened office in Chicago, Illinois. In addition to the current ...


The Age

paidContent.org - Life Photo Archive Goes Live On Google ...
Washington Post, United States - Nov 18, 2008
Time Inc. execs aren't commenting on advertising but I've confirmed that the deal with Google includes revenue sharing for advertising. ...
Google adds iconic Life photos to index Bizjournals.com
all 223 news articles

Advertising - Google News


registration of site in directories and searchenginesBlogarama - The Blog Directory

Notebook memory advice
home | site map | references
advertising-s.net © 2007